Inner Landscape (part 2)

Concept development

My 5 sets of thumbnail sketches are:

1.


This girl come out her house and saw the place are all flowers.Like any normal living things.Then, it start to rain and something started to drop down and form houses. And guess what they are living in the toilet bowl which a person have just finish doing his business.
The first shot is a P.O.V shot.Second is a full shot. Third is a full shot. Fourth, i want to do a upshot. Fifth, i wanna do a pan shot. Lastly, is a zoom out.

2.


It shows some seed growing out into some creatures. And they start to dance around happily.Zooming out is actually showing they are the shits in the toilet bowl and the person started to flush it.And they are all gone.
First is a full shot. Second is a full shot too. Third is to down shot. Fourth is zoom out. Fifth, i want to do a down shot too. Lastly is a full shot.

3.


A guy went into the toilet and look at the toilet bowl for a while.He pick it up and break it into 2.In it is a secret garden, there are small creatures living inside. The small creatures die as their world was been discovered.
First is a over the shoulder(o.t.s). Second is a down shot from the boy. Third is a full shot. Fourth, i want to do a point of view shot(p.o.v). Fifth is a zoom in shot. Lastly is a wide close-up.

4.


She is in a scary graveyard and suddenly saw zombies coming out walking towards her. All the dead people start to rise from the death and wolf started to howling.She ran until a dead end,she was so frighten that she pee out. She jump out of the toilet bowl and flush it. Opening the toilet's door, all the monster are still outside.
First is a full shot. Second is a pan shot. Third, i want a over the shoulder(o.t.s). Fourth is a full or down shot. Fifth is a middle close-up shot. Lastly is a over the shoulder(o.t.s) or point of view shot(p.o.v).

5.


A boy jump into the toilet bowl. Inside he starts to do meditation while floating. He comes to an island and saw small creatures. They started to play together. But he suddenly took a sword out and kill all the creatures. He jump out the toilet bowl and flushing it,but he didn't know someone is flushing him too.
First is a full shot. Second is a pan shot. Third is a over the shoulder(o.t.s) or a wide close-up. Fourth, i want it to be a upshot or full shot. Fifth is either a full shot or upshot(to let the audience to feel being the victim. Lastly is a zoom out out shot.


All have the main message is
" Never Overlook or Underlook on what we see."



The artistic influences:

I am influences by Edward Gorey. Most of his works are surrealist art. Some people classify him as a cartoonist, an illustrator who wrote or writer who drew. His work are literary nonsense(plays with convention of language and logic through a careful balance of sense and non-sense element. Its strict to structure is balanced by semantics chaos and plays with logic. Usually formal diction and toner genre is easily recognizable by various techniques it uses to create nonsense is often caused by an excess of meaning, rather than lack of it.) , yet there is no one category that can encompass the great variety of style and subject in his many books.
I am influence by him with his cartoon drawing, his story are mostly cartoon in a more frightening ways.


Robert Sabuda, is a leading children;s pop-up book artist and paper engineer. He does fantasy storys, his famous pop-up story is 'The Wonderful Wizard of Oz' and 'Alice's Adventures in Wonderland'.
I am influence by his cute cartoon in a more adventure likes.


Francisco Goya, he did more on scary painting.Goya was himself undergoing a physical and metal breakdown. 'Saturn devouring his sons' which display a greco-Roman mythological scene of the god Saturn consuming a child, reference to Spain's ongoing civil conflicts. 'Deafened and driven half-mad' the scenes are singularly disturbing, an outraged conscience in the face of death and destruction.
I am influence by his work in doing a little scary into my drawing.Using some frighten image in my drawing.


I adapt all this artists in different ways to put in my sketches to create my own. Mostly, or should i say all is into cartoons and in a journey to inside the toilet bowl.Edward Gorey's style made me to do my sketches to be cute and the same time give people a feeling of nonsensical in my thumbnail sketches. While Robert Sabuda influence more in the using other people's ideas to become your own. So i do all my sketches is more cartoon like style.


pls do give comments to improve my work.